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Whispering Pines

Whispers fill the air, In the language of the breeze; Spoken by the pines.

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Elaine George

Date: 10/29/2009 10:18:00 PM

Dear Raul, You are a master of the Haiku. Simply beautiful ! To my favorite list this goes. Lainie

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/17/2009 9:57:00 AM

I haven't seen a haiku in a long while, but, this was worth the view, great work!

Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:53:00 AM

The language of the breeze, I don't know how you do it, but great job.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:17:00 AM

Shhh, listen to the whispers, nice job. DN

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:23:00 AM

Awesome haiku Raul................Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:30:00 AM

Nice use of language.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:19:00 PM

Brilliant haiku, the language of the breeze. Love E.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/24/2009 11:40:00 AM

Heavenly imagery. Sweeps me off my feet. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/24/2009 11:14:00 AM

Dear Raul, Super Awesome Haiku YOU would like to come to my cabin surrounded by Pines We could sit and listen then pen the whispers ALWAYS...HG

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/24/2009 8:47:00 AM

sweeeeet! listening to the pines speak, thats gangsta! great j.o.b.

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/24/2009 8:18:00 AM

You've doe it again. Really first rate. Thanks.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/24/2009 8:01:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, I love the images it leaves in my mind..When the wind blows it whispers so beautifully, never heard anything like it before.Very creative as per you...GB, Tyesha

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/24/2009 7:50:00 AM

Shhhhh.....let's see if we can hear what they are saying :) !!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/24/2009 6:19:00 AM

Wow, this one speaks to my heart as I imagine through your words these great pines towering high above me and the wind whistling through the limbs. Wonderful, adding this one to my favs. Smiles from Lolita

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/24/2009 4:36:00 AM

I believe this to be true! great haiku! Raul! very well crafted, imparts a mysterious feel, cool!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/24/2009 3:47:00 AM

Another wonderfully done Haiku...love the cool images that makes this work.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:47:00 PM

Never thought of the air being whispers. Nice poetic impression. Tyler