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On Rippled Waters Haiku 78

between shapeless clouds the first peak of sunbeams on rippled waters

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Sneha Rv

Date: 5/15/2015 9:53:00 AM

This is lovely!! :D :D

Julia Ward

Date: 2/28/2015 4:50:00 AM

Excellent Haiku! I invite you to read mine... I have written several this month, and they are all high quality and admired by john fleming, for instance. Best wishes, Julia

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/5/2014 9:14:00 PM

I love the imagery in this one, Char! Very nice haiku! Thank you for visiting my page. Much appreciated. Love and hugs! :) xxxx D

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/3/2014 7:15:00 AM

O I can connect, fantabulous Charmaine LOVE .....RAJAT

James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2014 7:31:00 AM

I've only been writing for 5 years, and every time I read Haiku, I'm in awe that so many images can be described by so few words. This piece is no exception, love it Charmaine, James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2014 11:44:00 AM

This is lovely Charm; last week I took a coloured photo that resembles this one, and the result came out nearly in black and white. (I have a silhouette of Filfla in it, too) // paul

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 10/29/2014 8:16:00 PM

I declare, Charma, you are the queen of haiku! They have the outstanding ability to force me to imagine that I am right there, seeing everything with my own two eyes.