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Butterflies

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yellow butterflies sip Mexican petunias.... leaves drift 'pon fall's breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2017 6:41:00 AM
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Lovely and 'intoxicating' imagery, Sara. Regards // paul
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Harshita Chaudhary
Date: 10/8/2017 8:18:00 AM
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The beauty of butterflies came before my eyes. Beautiful haiku.
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Russell Sivey
Date: 10/6/2017 8:25:00 AM
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Leaves drift as the butterflies twitter against the breeze! What beautiful imagery you have within your Haiku my friend! You have enthralled me this morning with your glorious skill in writing this form, not always easy to do, but you did so without seemingly any troubles (I know how hard it is to write some forms and it may look flowingly easy, it was difficult to get there)! Great Work!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 2:15:00 PM
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Russell, Yes, Haiku is not as easy as it looks..Sometimes a line comes without any problem but putting it together with other lines is a bit harder..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/5/2017 7:43:00 PM
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A beautiful haiku Sara! Enjoyed :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 2:10:00 PM
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Thanks for the kind review..Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 12:14:00 PM
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Lovely imagery of butterflies and drifiting leaves!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2017 2:19:00 PM
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Vijay, Thanks for dropping by..I hope the visit was a pleasant one..Sara
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Silent One
Date: 10/5/2017 11:38:00 AM
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Lovely haiku Sara..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2017 2:09:00 PM
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SO, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment..Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/5/2017 10:40:00 AM
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Lovely in both Haiku and photograph, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2017 2:03:00 PM
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Lin, Thanks for the kind review..I like that photo also..Sara

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