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gracefuldreameroflove: “ Playing in the meadows?? ?Lo?e`? ? ”:

First unsteady steps Once you have found the balance The Gravity's law Small spots of sunshine When the world is on its head Wow ... heaven's eye shines - 15.06.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - www.howmanysyllables.com - Haiku 5-7-5

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Date: 7/14/2017 4:37:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:30:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed with a beautiful picture. World is on its head without lifting, a philosophical too. Sometimes wisdom comes from reverse side. Loved always, my lovely dear friend, bl
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:32:00 PM
- Yes, that's really true dear Bl :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/19/2017 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful haikus Anne.. Pleasure to read you today... Thanks for sharing ...
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:38:00 AM
- Glad you my haiku, Supraja :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2017 9:38:00 PM
well, I did not see a recent monoku but I saw this cute pair of Ku's!
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Date: 6/18/2017 2:36:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2017 6:35:00 AM
Isn't that the cutest thing I've seen today packaged in a great Haiku!! I love it...Maria xx
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Date: 6/17/2017 6:44:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Maria :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/16/2017 12:48:00 PM
So cute, me like it a lot :)
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:50:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, Akkina :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 6:22:00 PM
We fall and then we rise:) Great haiku and adorable picture, Anne Lise.
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Date: 6/16/2017 3:03:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 6:14:00 PM
Ahh!! I wonder who is in the picture..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2017 3:03:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 4:39:00 PM
A great Haiku...Sunshine Smile style...a beautiful balance Anne-Lise...god bless & (((HUGS)))...^WW^
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Date: 6/16/2017 2:56:00 AM
- W.W., many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 12:03:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , Haiku smiles , cute and fluffy happy :))))hugs
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Date: 6/15/2017 12:15:00 PM
- Many thanks Niall, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 8:32:00 AM
Nice poem, I like those first steps they really ground the reader in childhood. As for my own Crispy Skinned Cossages, well maybe I've gone too far with that one. It's just meant to be about freeing your mind, and letting your imagination fly. But so far other folk don't understand it either. Thanks for giving it a read.
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:55:00 AM
- They are so cute on unstable feet, Scott :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 7:25:00 AM
Very cute, Sunshine, sure brings a smile:)
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:54:00 AM
- A smile is a positive signal, Jo :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 7:20:00 AM
Beautiful and tenderly written dearest, Anne-Lise! Loved them! Hugs!
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:51:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with you, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 7:08:00 AM
Yes, so cute !! It has me smiling too. What a great Haiku! :) Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:50:00 AM
- Thanks for great words and friendly visits, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 6:47:00 AM
This was so cute and brought a huge smile to my face. I loved this one my friend.
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:47:00 AM
- A smile is the best I can get, Chris :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 5:38:00 AM
Good Morning Anne. This is very precious and loving. All is well within your entry. Have a great morning. Wonderful work
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:46:00 AM
- Dear Lisa - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/15/2017 4:26:00 AM
absolutely charming poems and image Anne Lise:-) Happy Morning in Norway:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:41:00 AM
- A busy day today, Jan :) - just posted my haiku and ran out the door :) - Now is the time to say happy evening :) - Many thanks for friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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