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Kyle Maples

Date: 3/31/2013 8:28:00 AM

learning the language of love is quite a laborious process. Enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2013 10:41:00 AM

Kyle,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/4/2012 4:41:00 PM

I like it Anne ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2012 2:03:00 AM

Debbie,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/31/2012 3:48:00 PM

Oh....This one is heart heavy! <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2012 3:51:00 PM

Dan,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2012 1:57:00 PM

So true on this haiku sort of sad too. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2012 1:58:00 PM

Phyllis,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 10/26/2012 4:04:00 PM

very interesting, but a bit sad Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 4:06:00 PM

Jancarl,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/25/2012 3:31:00 PM

Yes, the human condition doesn't allow one without the other. Hears hoping your load is light.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 2:38:00 AM

Robert,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/25/2012 5:53:00 AM

deep haiku Anne.....best wishes....love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM

Joseph,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 10/25/2012 4:07:00 AM

A profound write by you here Anne.Enjoyed the read.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM

Kash,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Watisungla Ao

Date: 10/24/2012 9:31:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Anne.Enjoyed reading it.Hugs, Watisungla :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2012 2:02:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/24/2012 12:25:00 PM

Awesome combination of haiku. So glad to read your poems today.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2012 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2012 3:59:00 PM

So profound my dear Anne Wonderful. You are now the queen of Haiku!! Luv n hugs Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2012 1:46:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/23/2012 12:00:00 PM

Really marvelous and heart touching coz you have touched very deeply the side effects of love and grief. Thanks for giving time to read my write. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2012 10:48:00 AM

wonderful, yes Anne it seems we have to learn both, love and grief,, love how you constructed this...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 10/23/2012 1:18:00 AM

A really deep haiku to dig into it and discover things

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2012 2:11:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2012 3:11:00 PM

I enjoyed your haiku set here, sweetie. How is it going today?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2012 3:16:00 PM

It's been a nice autumn day Andrea. - Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Jamal Abboud

Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM

pithy and profound, still thinking.......well done. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2012 2:47:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/22/2012 11:32:00 AM

You know what? You are right. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2012 11:37:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 7:41:00 AM

so true...death is heavy...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 PM

I couldn't agree more with these 2 haikus. Fantastic job!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2012 1:03:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 12:50:00 PM

Anne, your haiku, runs deep... does not matter if you are not a master... you hit a deep note with both haikus... grief is , bad when love is gone... xox~pd

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 12:55:00 PM

But fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/21/2012 12:04:00 PM

‡ I Love The Feeling Along Side The Tone I Find Within This, Beautiful Short Yet Splendid Verse, Sweet Beautiful Anne Lise. Not Certain If This Corresponds With Any Thoughts Here, Beautiful Girl, But I Have Been Trying To Slay Mrs. Hyde For Years Now ? Yet I Feel For Her So I Might Let Her Hang Around Until I Relocate; Poor Girl, LOL. Beautiful Poem, Truly, And Thank You For Your Precious Loving Hearts Lovely Visit. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/21/2012 11:08:00 AM

These are two very powerful and awesome haikus my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I love it/them! They'll really move the reader's feeling, just like mine. Thank you so much for sharing and especially for your very inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled time/day always in sunshine! love and hugs:) Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 11:17:00 AM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 10/21/2012 10:08:00 AM

Lif's has its ups and downs, that's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it,God bles you. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 11:19:00 AM

Sorry: Erich.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 10/21/2012 8:14:00 AM

Anne-Lise I like the inversion in these, it is very thought provoking, well done...David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM

Sorry: David.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/21/2012 8:05:00 AM

Good write... It works very well! It leaves us lingering with images... PS. I've been busy with the Trolls and friends again... your friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM

Sorry: Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2012 10:27:00 AM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)