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Liquid Little Stones

liquid little stones skipping and skittering free on shared umbrellas

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:42:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Harpreet Kaur

Date: 1/28/2016 9:14:00 AM

My appreciation for this Haiku is too deep for words. Congratulations Rickie!

Kate Sparks

Date: 11/12/2015 9:23:00 AM

I hear the raindrops!

Norman Crocker

Date: 7/18/2015 3:33:00 PM

Interesting thoughts.

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:22:00 PM

RICKIE, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/18/2008 3:51:00 PM

Rickie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

Sue Mason

Date: 12/17/2008 11:44:00 AM

This is just the most awesome write I've seen about rain!! At first I was imaging lily pads as the "umbrellas" and then I realized you weren't talking about throwing pebbles into the water ... LOL ... what a great write and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week!! Congratulations. Hope you have a wonderful holiday and '09 is great for you!!

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/17/2008 7:17:00 AM

Rickie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

Elaine George

Date: 12/16/2008 8:49:00 PM

I can see this so vividly. Well done! Lainie

Daver Austin

Date: 12/16/2008 8:27:00 AM

Good image and feeling. Congrats on this fine little piece being selected. Love, daver

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/15/2008 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2008 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Rickie. Love, Carol

Date: 12/14/2008 5:27:00 PM

Another honor for this poem. It is wonderful. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 7/13/2008 4:22:00 AM

Lovely, sweet haiku.