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Whispers of Love

sea froth covers the shore... night whispers

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 2:05:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Rita.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 11:22:00 AM

NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/21/2014 12:17:00 AM

Welcome to Poetrysoup! Peace & Love Mathew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 3:31:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rita :) - I choose your first well done haiku poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/1/2014 10:36:00 PM

Rita,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Cristina M Moldoveanu

Date: 4/1/2014 12:18:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. I can feel the froth sweeping imaginary feet. It is here a delicate balance, a perfect symbiosis between nature and man.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2014 6:51:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Rita , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2014 2:05:00 AM

Is there a typo in 1st line? (forth); if there is then I can say that it's a lovely haiku :) // paul