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True Love

My love is so true Crazy heart beating for you Makes my mind wander

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/16/2017 1:04:00 PM
Well described--the effect of love!
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Klio Tsitsikroni
Date: 8/25/2017 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 8/16/2017 11:14:00 AM
Love does that to us, doesn't it? Nice one, Klio. Call it a Senryu instead of Haiku...which is usually written with regard to a setting of place---geographical. Also, don't capitalize the first word of each line. Cheers to you, my dear new friend.
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:13:00 PM
Cheers, Lin And thank you again for the advice. I shall apply it.

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