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Time Flows On

time flows on seven years a long time when joined to seventy three will birds be singing

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Date: 12/17/2017 4:10:00 AM
Your title is a perfect choice. Time, so wise men inform me, does indeed flow just like a river. So who says it must flow just one way...does the river not dawdle, pool, eddy, stall, and, sometimes even, backflow? The surface of the river might seem to glide along at a smooth and constant pace...but underneath it is all turmoil and diversion. A personalized and thought provoking Haiku, Patricia. Your affectionate friend. :) john
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