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The Wooden Fence

On the wooden fence The squirrel runs quickly From the chasing dog

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Date: 9/10/2017 3:24:00 AM

That's quite a vivid picture you paint, Darlene. We have many dogs in Malta, but no squirrels! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2017 11:31:00 AM

Malta has no squirrels! I wonder why. Have a nice day my friend.

Date: 8/31/2017 8:25:00 PM

Lovely poem. You a fan of William Carlos Williams?

Ricky Muse
Date: 9/16/2017 10:22:00 PM

He was an imagist. His poem "The Red Wheelbarrow" is considered a classic....

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2017 8:34:00 PM

Hello Richard,I not sure, what poem did he write? I probably red one of his poems a long time ago. Have a nice evening my friend.

Date: 8/21/2017 10:57:00 AM

He had better, good one Darlene...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/21/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thank ou Charlie , he alwsays runs quickly to safety from the dog. have a good evening love my friend.

Date: 8/20/2017 3:18:00 PM

Read my squirrel poem Darlene. Love your write I can see this in my head nicely written short and sweet.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2017 3:33:00 PM

Hello Michael,I will read your squirrel poem. Thank you Michael.I will read it right now.Have a nice day my friend.

Date: 8/18/2017 4:07:00 PM

They are quite nimble...very nice haiku Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/19/2017 8:23:00 AM

Hello Joseph,yes the squirrels are very nimble I see them in action all the time. Thank you Joseph. have a nice day my friend.

Date: 8/18/2017 9:00:00 AM

Nice Haiku with a lot of action built into it. I can see that squirrel running now.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2017 1:51:00 PM

As I was writing this haiku , I also saw the action going on.Have a nice day my friend

Date: 8/17/2017 5:11:00 PM

Lively image!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2017 7:37:00 AM

Hello Kim,thenk you so much. Have a nice day my friend.