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Streamers of Grief Run

Streamers of grief run Fly free from innermost lands Spawn of pain from man. (January 10, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/10/2011 1:35:00 PM
I liked it. Just a suggestion though, instead of going with abstractions when you write haiku, try going with concrete images/words that will convey an immediate picture or sensation. As one famous poet said, "flee thee from abstractions." Anyway, great job though! Keep it up!
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