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Wisdom has a price ... "No, Luke, I am your father!" TRUTH can be brutal.

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Date: 7/2/2017 10:42:00 PM
This is the line hotly debated in the Mandela Effect discussions!! Great example of brutal truth.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/3/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! Yes, indeed! I cheated and paraphrased for the syllables ... I could have done something else with the context, but I wanted that impact line where it was, so I added "Luke" ... the Purists will have to forgive me, artistic license and all, lol! ;-)

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