Spider Web

filigree shimmers sunlit dewdrop tiara graces summer rose

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/23/2015 8:55:00 PM

good one Viv, :) my 8yr old granddaughter & I were just reading and watching spiders on utube ;)

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/23/2015 10:00:00 PM

Aren't children wonderful? They can pick up slugs and watch spiders, but when they become teenagers they scream when you tell them to tidy their room..... thanks for visiting my Haiku, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Viv x

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/9/2015 12:00:00 AM

wow I love this one. I have faved it and give it a 7 because spider poetry is a favorite topic of mine. I once wrote one titled 'Cobwebs on the Rosebush'.....great minds lol

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/9/2015 12:04:00 AM

Hi, Suzanne. Just been to read your piece, love 'pinkened dawn'- nice description. And the way such a short verse goes from light to dark and then a bright finish with rebirth. Lovely. Thanks for visiting, and the fave. Very kind. Viv x

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/26/2015 6:45:00 AM

This is lovely!! :D :D

Viv Wigley
Date: 5/26/2015 6:58:00 AM

Hello and thanks, Sneha, for your comment. it's nice when something so small and easily missed can catch you attention and inspire you. Blessings, Viv x

Judy Konos

Date: 4/7/2015 7:55:00 AM

That's a WOW WOW...Thanks!

Viv Wigley
Date: 4/7/2015 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for popping by, Judy- will check your work out soon. Love, Viv x

Paul Callus

Date: 4/4/2015 8:14:00 AM

A lovely haiku which presents an attractive picture with nice choice of words. #7 // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 4/4/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thanks, Paul, I landed on my feet with this one. Regards, Viv

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/1/2015 2:16:00 AM

Thanks, Rob. Nearly missed my bus with this one. Worth the brief experience, though. Regards, Viv

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/1/2015 2:03:00 AM

A skilled favorite of beauty.

Viv Wigley
Date: 4/1/2015 2:17:00 AM

Thanks, Rob. Nearly missed my bus with this one. Worth the brief experience, though. Regards, Viv (after filling in the wrong box- duh!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2015 2:02:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Viv!

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/30/2015 11:46:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I composed it whilst standing at the bus stop, looking over a neighbouring garden. It pays to be a little more observant in life, I think. Viv x

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/30/2015 5:12:00 AM

This is an amazing craft. I almost feel like I can touch the words.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/30/2015 6:13:00 AM

Thanks, njeri. Sometimes it works better than others. Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2015 4:41:00 AM

simply delightful Mr Viv:-) Hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/30/2015 6:13:00 AM

Thanks, Jan x