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Poetic Waters

Hummed poetic waves, Soothing whispers of the sea; Calm reciting surge.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:48:00 AM

Awesome ... I think inspiration has built a nest inside your heart.

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/24/2009 11:11:00 AM

your words are full of life and wonder you awe me in many ways great piece you got mail

Brian Strand

Date: 5/23/2009 12:42:00 AM

A beautiful write Raul,sounds percolate through the verse like the alliteration of the the last three syllables.On for my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/22/2009 8:33:00 PM

LOVE THE TITLE!!!!! Your words are splendid Raul.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/22/2009 3:37:00 PM

I simply want to be there. Divine. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2009 3:06:00 PM

Better and better....your haikus are wonderful!

Date: 5/22/2009 2:12:00 PM

Wonderful imagery for a peaceful feel. Nice use of personification. Enjoyed this one! Karen

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/22/2009 2:06:00 PM

mmmm. I love this. :)

James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2009 1:19:00 PM

Hummed poetic waves, soothing line, very choral, James

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/22/2009 12:33:00 PM

Cool I like this Raul good job. Love ELizabeth

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/22/2009 12:30:00 PM

Facinating.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2009 10:56:00 AM

Mail for you, Raul.

Juan Onate

Date: 5/22/2009 10:49:00 AM

cool i love this one great raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2009 10:47:00 AM

Very nice (again), Raul!