Passing...

Screams above the din A moment of grief and loss A loved one passes

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2011 4:06:00 AM

James, a very sad emotion when one has to find out a love one passed,..God bless,..Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2010 1:14:00 AM

Good one, James and thanks for your SWEET comment to me today. sorry I can't read a longer one of yours right now. I have been here all night and am ready to drop dead tired, but I gotta finish what I started!! And I am almost cuaght up on comments now. LUv, Andrea

Sarah Hales

Date: 6/29/2010 5:33:00 AM

I can relate to this .... sarah x Well penned James x

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 6/29/2010 3:29:00 AM

I think you nailed a really subtle feeling here. I can definitely relate. Thanks for the great read! :) -Grace

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/29/2010 2:46:00 AM

Nice thought nicely expression with great images.