No Rain

Two thousand green leaves I need to love you, said clouds I gaze on my thorns _________________________________ June19/2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2017 3:16:00 PM

Excellent Haiku,Probir, rain is a blessing to nurture our gardens ~*

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/22/2017 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Eve ...

Bawa Talwar

Date: 6/19/2017 5:08:00 PM

All of us I think love rains.your desire is clearly brought out why thorns you will enjoy more rains. Probir please take the trouble of reviewing my new additions.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/22/2017 10:23:00 PM

Thank you ... I'll do ... Give me a little time ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/19/2017 12:50:00 PM

Use the rain dance, I heard is very useful! Haha!Lovely and clever Haiku dear, Probir! Hope you get as much rain as you need!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/22/2017 10:24:00 PM

Thank you ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/19/2017 9:06:00 AM

Good one, Probir:) Thorns is not good Hope you get some rain:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2017 12:30:00 PM

May your hope materialize! ... Thank you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2017 7:26:00 AM

Enjoyed as much as the refreshing rain Probir!:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2017 12:31:00 PM

So nice of you, Jan ... Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 6/19/2017 7:01:00 AM

Nicely done, Probir! Enjoy your day

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, White ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/19/2017 6:01:00 AM

I like the second line of this nice Haiku you wrote Probir. (and I guess we can send you some rain from here, since we have so much this Spring) :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2017 12:33:00 PM

I envy you ! ?.. Thank you ...