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"less To Carry"

My shoulders are tired of carrying so much grief from a long hard week..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/11/2010 3:35:00 PM

Been there done that so looking for the weekend to rest and relax...Good to be in a job that one can do that...Your comments were so encouraging ...I am glad that you went back to see some of my older ones..I am looking forward to that heavenly home for sure..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 1:35:00 PM

These long hard weeks make us stronger Michael, as long as we realise that the strength is there. I like the tad of wisdom in this Haiku >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 5:17:00 PM

I can really relate to this one. ALL TOO WELL. Thanks for your sweet comments on the poems of mine you read. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2010 12:11:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/4/2010 6:50:00 AM

It will take time Michael, remember He will not test you beyond your ability.. bb always Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2010 5:01:00 PM

wow,, deep write,, a grief which seems to pain,, enjoyed the write...P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2010 3:50:00 PM

Its just the reality of it all.. W.K. ... that is the new adjustment for life now.. with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2010 3:49:00 PM

Then rest Michael and u will be energized and your mind enlightened to continue to thrill us all with your words and poetry ..with luv..