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Late October Haiku

LATE AUTUMN HAIKU they’re almost gone now how brown, bare the branches look some toys in the leaves when rain turns to snow how sad those two last roses brave faces with tears apples bruised apples scattered on the frosted green and this twiggy frown music in the wind late october’s final song dancing red and gold talk of winter now old dog by a crackling fire shutters rattle pings! photo of dear dad he loved that fulsome willow fallen leaves marker Dave Austin

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Date: 1/27/2019 7:07:00 AM
Very well written!
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Date: 6/3/2016 10:39:00 PM
This poem presents imagery that is fresh, remarkable, even stunning. I enjoyed every line. Wonderful work, daver.
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Daver Austin
Date: 6/4/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks and good to meet you. I'll go and read your work now. Love, daver
Date: 11/2/2015 3:56:00 PM
Hi Dave. Thanks for the visit today, and the kind words. It has been a while since I've written anything. But, reading some of your works, particularly Haiikus like this, has triggered me to begin again!
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Date: 5/30/2015 4:43:00 PM
came to tell you thanks for seeing one of my poems. Did you know that this series of haiku is listed as your BEST poetry as judged , I suppose, by members of Soup. I've always loved these too.
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Daver Austin
Date: 6/1/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Not sure if these are good representatives of haiku. Evidently they communicated and this makes me happy. LOve, daver
Date: 11/24/2014 4:45:00 PM
Daver, the first four are my favorites. Wonderful haiku that removes me to another place and time. Beautiful! #7 I am fav'ing these.
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:48:00 PM
Very well crafted and appealing verse here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/9/2014 2:55:00 PM
beautiful but sad haiku here, my friend. Have a great week : )
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Date: 10/26/2014 2:03:00 AM
I loved the beautiful imagery within these sad lines. This is a very moving poem in many ways. Very nicely written, Daver!
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Date: 10/25/2014 1:05:00 AM
This is an excellent set of haiku my dear friend Dave. You did it extraordinarily well! I like it. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:33:00 PM
Well done here Daver, lots of memory and it will find echoes with many people I would guess..'
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:04:00 PM
Perfect, Daver! 1st my fave! Thanks for stopping by my zombies acrostic....you understood...jimbo
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Date: 10/21/2014 4:26:00 PM
DAver, I am so proud of you being published in a haiku journal. I have not had that honor! I think less than half of my haiku are true haiku. I think I can recognize them when I see them, but they are so very hard to write!!
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Date: 10/21/2014 4:04:00 PM
These are really good, Daver. Some of them are true haiku too. A bit rare to find at Soup!! Love them.
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Date: 10/21/2014 4:57:00 AM
Dave, very descriptive work..I like how you did these..I especially like these two....music in the wind late october’s final song dancing red and gold talk of winter now old dog by a crackling fire shutters rattle pings...Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2014 4:50:00 PM
What an amazing way to group haiku. It reads like free verse. Set such a tone. Like jazz you could feel the season. Brilliant. Got to fav it.
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