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Haiku 69-About the Swan Lake

swan lake a feather falls silently

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/22/2014 12:35:00 PM

Agreed with Lyric Man. I am always impressed with people who dare to push the limits with just how short the haiku can be. A real gem, this one... faving!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2014 6:32:00 AM

swans always draw so beautiful forever they spend together very beautiful vision charmaine excellent pen dear friend

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/1/2014 3:04:00 PM

Very nice short poem here. In a few words you bring a gorgeous scene to life. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/1/2014 2:56:00 AM

Gorgeous imagery! Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2014 7:21:00 PM

oh my goodness. you have done it again. this is perfection!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2014 6:23:00 PM

This is silently perfect Charma......hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2014 5:51:00 PM

beautiful imagery Charmaine - its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/30/2014 5:42:00 PM

Pretty image :)