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Graceful like tree seeds gather blackbirds qi gong on green lawn

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Date: 6/22/2017 7:57:00 PM
ooh, I love the way you turn it around and say that the seeds are gathering the blackbirds. SO cool.
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:06:00 AM
Very meditative and gentle flowing haiku, Phil. Your impressive knowledge of a variety of subjects always shines thru in your poetry. An spiritual exercise in poetic movement. Love always, brother.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 6/19/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thanks man, always good to hear from you...I've been out of the loop for a bit. Peddling the book.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things