Beauty Spills

the mountains unfold my dreams in layers of hills where the beauty spills Heidi Sands 10/5/17

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2017 2:51:00 PM

Pretty!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2017 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2017 8:52:00 AM

I wish I could see the hills where you live, i have flat land here! If I go southeast I can hit hilly country, but the mountains that you have aren't here! I am impressed with your beautiful write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading it this morning! Such a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2017 8:56:00 AM

It would be nice if you could see mountains Russell. They are so beautiful. Thank you for your kind comment on this ! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2017 7:26:00 PM

A haiku of lovely imagery Heidi. Each line is a beautiful facet of your poetic gem. Well done and enjoyed! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2017 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2017 6:11:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Heidi..best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2017 6:24:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph . I appreciate your comment :)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 10/5/2017 5:34:00 PM

Nice flowing little Haiku, This is a difficult form of poetry to convey,, because it leaves a lot to the readers imagination. You seem to have mastered the art, regards, Kevin xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2017 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Kevin :)