A Pair

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a pair of doves preen each other at summer's end.... an empty nest waits

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Probir Gupta

Date: 8/15/2017 4:34:00 AM

Your last line is strikingly meaningful rendering the haiku excellent ... By the way, thank you for my Quintain's placement ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 7:22:00 AM

Probir, The last line could be taken several different ways and I think that you saw throught that..I appreciate the kind review and for your time spent here..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 8/14/2017 6:14:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, if humans could do the same thing would be a better place... Thank you, Sara, for my placement.. really honored to have been chosen dear friend..~*

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2017 5:37:00 PM

So much said in so few words--well executed Haiku Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 7:20:00 AM

Vijay, I appreciate the kind review of my work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 6:38:00 AM

What an awesome poem. Lovely.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2017 4:46:00 AM

Such a romantically natural write my friend! Full of nature and exquisitely penned to make me desire to see these birds nudge each other! I loved reading this illustrious poem this morning, what a remarkable piece Sara! Great Work!!